I am a learner at Glen Taylor School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 13 and my teacher is Mrs Fonua.
I really like your poem - it's fun and lines two and four rhyme - well done. Can you alter it so that lines one and three rhyme as well? I'm sure you can.
You almost got there with rhyming your poem Sesilia. Keep it up!
I really like your poem - it's fun and lines two and four rhyme - well done. Can you alter it so that lines one and three rhyme as well? I'm sure you can.
ReplyDeleteYou almost got there with rhyming your poem Sesilia. Keep it up!
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